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I set out to make this very soft and dreamy, but i always end up making work that is, as my mum says " a little sinister"
there will be more to come from this shoot
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anyway, i'm not sure i like it, i think i look a little awkward.

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:iconnymoos:
i liked it , yes its bright , reminds us of lovely dreams ,she looks worry , thinking of something hard .
i name it " looking for something " :)

its great work , you are very talented , thank you.
:iconfuinurnecrophily:
Beautiful ^_^

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:iconedwardlluver21:
i agree with :iconnymoos:...... you look like you are sad but looking for something. like trying to remember a good memory or thinking of a loved one far away.... maybe that'll spring some ideas. :)

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:iconxnattyx:
thanks for your input :D

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:iconedwardlluver21:
np! :)

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Forever.
Your skin sparkles,
Your eyes dazzle,
Your heart is still,
You're cold as ice,
You're hard as rock,
Hair bronzed,
Your voice velvety.
I will always love you.
:iconpickled-poppy:
in the attic
is my suggestion
i really like this the soft focus is lovely and the colouring works nicely
The pose is great <3

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:iconxnattyx:
thankyou :D i like that :)

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it's my birthday today :D 19- getting old eeeek [link] :) x
:iconpickled-poppy:
Coolio <3

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I like the words Smashing, Golly, Gosh, Corking,Cracking and Soliloquy.
My list of current projects [link]
My ATC only account ~Pickled-PoppyATC
:iconixzjenn07zxi:
hey =) you asked me to take a look and I really like it! The sepia perfect for the mood of the shot and I'd have to say the girl looks more worried or apprehesive than dreamy (mainly bc of the wide eyes). the lighting is fantastic as well.

my only suggestion, bc I'm a nag about the little details, would be to do a little cropping on the left hand side. You see the wooden panels on the ceiling that come down as a triangular shape on the back wall? on the left side you see it a lot more than the right (it might be because of the angle the shot was taken at). I would even up those sides so the background is more consistent and your eye remains drawn directly to the girl.

really nice work though! great job =)

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"You should always try to see the beauty of a painting; even if the colors appear smeared." - Myself


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forever waiting...lovely pic

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July 10
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EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
KODAK EASYSHARE C533 ZOOM DIGITAL CAMERA
1/4 second
F/2.7
6 mm
160
Jul 10, 2009, 9:07:38 PM

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